tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post114089834929388911..comments2023-10-04T08:56:55.179-07:00Comments on Dee's Diary: Holy Conflict, Batman!Dee Tenoriohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14084719867161784544noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1141007621757967192006-02-26T18:33:00.000-08:002006-02-26T18:33:00.000-08:00Dee,My head is about to explode just reading all t...Dee,<BR/><BR/>My head is about to explode just reading all that. LOL! My goodness! I'm basically having the same issues. Having to go back and rework stuff. It's a pain in the butt.<BR/><BR/>TanyaShesawriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14904247751806210823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1140994126549517952006-02-26T14:48:00.000-08:002006-02-26T14:48:00.000-08:00Cynthia writes: Lorie, LOL ... just reading throug...<B> Cynthia writes: </B><BR/><BR/>Lorie, LOL ... just reading through your short little snippet of a synop leaves my old head reeling like I'm trying to do mental long-division! <BR/><BR/>But you know ... sometimes in the overblown stuff (I'm thinking of Dee saying "maybe" on novel #2), there's a good idea buried in the avalanche of high drama ...<BR/><BR/>And Dee my synop of both of mine are way too kind ... you would have HAD to read a bit of each. Your eyes would have rolled right out of your head and bounced twice on the floor!<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to that e-mail whenever you get a chance!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1140968646126309122006-02-26T07:44:00.000-08:002006-02-26T07:44:00.000-08:00Cynthia--LOL, you'll prolly be grateful for that l...Cynthia--LOL, you'll prolly be grateful for that lack of a blog when I complete the Queen of Cheese graphic, lol.<BR/><BR/>Ahhhh, Papermate! I knew ye well!! I have to admit, book 2 still has some possibility in my head, lol! Alas, lol, those are both short of the massively bad smelling landslide of conflict as Faith, lol. But definitely a good try! (PS--sorry I'm taking so long getting back to you on that email! I'm slime, I AM! But I should have some time today!)<BR/><BR/>Lorie: "She was a telepath, and telekentic and she had amnesia."<BR/><BR/>ROFL, that girl must have a serious headache! But does she have way over the top conflict? I mean, hero has a goal for her, pentagon boy has some pull for her. But what does she want? LOL (and no, that's not permission to work on it! LOL!)<BR/><BR/>Smooches,<BR/>DeeDee Tenoriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14084719867161784544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1140933730594082342006-02-25T22:02:00.000-08:002006-02-25T22:02:00.000-08:00The Queen of Cheese huh? LOLAs dubious an honour a...The Queen of Cheese huh? LOL<BR/><BR/>As dubious an honour as that is I'll still share my overcooked tale. ;)<BR/><BR/>The girl was an alien, from a royal family at that, and here on earth b/c she had to go into hiding until she was old enough to fulfill her conquering role in "The Prophesy". <BR/><BR/>She was a telepath, and telekentic and she had amnesia. She was adopted by a human man who just happened to be rich enough he could hide her from the scientists, but his son, who she'd spurned, knew she was "off".<BR/><BR/>Her presense on earth had been unplanned, because the ship she'd been travelling on (which just happened to be captained by the hero's big brother) didn't survive the attack by the bad guys who'd been looking for her. She, of course, was the sole survivor.<BR/><BR/>Her status as missing had, naturally, sparked a war between the hero's planet and her own, despite the on going threat from the bad guys. <BR/><BR/>When the hero's ship has to make a pit stop landing on earth to do repairs and the hero discovers her living there he decides to fetch her home and end the war, much to the dismay of the human's son, who still harbours hope and a pentagon connection.<BR/><BR/>LOL, is that enough yet? I haven't even gotten them into space. Thank god the hard drive ate that story. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1140931583470890672006-02-25T21:26:00.000-08:002006-02-25T21:26:00.000-08:00Cynthia writes: Don't have a blog, so I wouldn't h...<B> Cynthia writes: </B><BR/><BR/>Don't have a blog, so I wouldn't have any place to show off your cool graphic, but your story reminded me of a couple of real horror stories, one of which is still lurking in my files. Maybe I should burn it? <BR/><BR/>Story number one was an epic penned (literally on college-ruled paper with Papermate blue ink) in high school, featuring the hottest guy teachers ever imagined (God knows they were fiction, b/c they weren't at MY school!) all drooling in turn over a demure, can't-imagine-what-she-did to turn their heads gal. It was written in first person, with wildly shifting POV, an idea I got from the few soaps I was allowed to watch (we're talking a handful of episodes, mind you.) It was completely pantsered, which meant it wouldn't have had a plot if I'd surgically inserted one. But it DID have tons and tons of the hottest scenes that Papermate could scratch out.<BR/><BR/>Cheesy novel 2 was written, again, with college rule paper and Papermate ink. This was a college effort and somewhat more polished, in that I sort of had a plot. It was about a guy and a gal who get into an awkward situation after she says no with her panties in her hand. He leaves and joins the Army, which ends the prologue. The book started with him returning home to find that the shy gal he'd left was now hot-de-trot and working with his dad in the mechanics' shop he owned. <BR/><BR/>Only problem was that I made the dad so hot that the gal fell for HIM, and I wound up making a convoluted story about a weird three-way triangle (b/c of COURSE she was irresistable as a real NY cheesecake! Or chocolate! and the cousin loved her too) <BR/><BR/>Yep ... I should burn it (the first one did get burnt, actually, after my mom threatened to see what exactly I had tucked in that three ring binder I carried everywhere and scribbled in incessantly ... Alas, it was no great loss to the literary world!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com