tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post112723429556470915..comments2023-10-04T08:56:55.179-07:00Comments on Dee's Diary: The 2nd Deadly Sin: PhraseologyDee Tenoriohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14084719867161784544noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1127257956042006152005-09-20T16:12:00.000-07:002005-09-20T16:12:00.000-07:00LOL, that's because you're my Emotional North, hon...LOL, that's because you're my Emotional North, hon. LOL! You have a natural bent towards finding the best words for expressing as you go. I actually spent an hour trying to think of a passive sentence but wasn't sure if I was doing it right (wrong? LOL).<BR/><BR/>But, as a basic example, lol, it should probably still work.<BR/><BR/>Note to readers: Listen to X.<BR/><BR/>LOL,<BR/>DeeDee Tenoriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14084719867161784544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10669152.post-1127249477639505802005-09-20T13:51:00.000-07:002005-09-20T13:51:00.000-07:00Now, see, I would have written that sentence: Jenn...Now, see, I would have written that sentence: Jenny raced across the field, desperate to reach the other end.<BR/><BR/>Using raced to emphasise the desperation. (and if I thought about it more I'd probably replace raced with something more urgent or desperate LOL)<BR/><BR/>XTHIS! Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264909640464583029noreply@blogger.com